#####CHAPTER 5: The Echoes of Eyes, I Cannot See
Elena’s POV
The dream returned again, as relentless as the tide.
I was walking through a street I didn’t know, rain slicking the cobblestones, the glow of lanterns reflecting in puddles that seemed deeper than they should be. And he was there — a presence I couldn’t see clearly, but one that pressed against me in ways I didn’t understand. A shadow brushing against the edges of my awareness, a whisper brushing my ear though no one spoke.
“Elena,” the voice murmured, low, steady. Familiar and impossible all at once. My chest tightened. I reached out into the dark, but my hands met only empty air.
I woke with my heart hammering, the sheets twisted around my limbs. The clock read 3:14 a.m. Outside, the city was asleep, the hum of distant traffic low and indifferent. Yet the echo of the dream lingered, stretching tendrils into the corners of my bedroom.
I couldn’t shake it.
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Morning came reluctantly, gray and hesitant. Sunlight slipped through the blinds, thin and pale, brushing across the floorboards where dust danced in motes. I moved through my apartment quietly, making coffee, listening to the faint rattle of the radiator.
The dream clung to me, a sticky residue in the back of my mind. Every step felt heavier than it should, as though the air itself had grown dense overnight.
At the shop, I tried to focus. Arranging flowers, greeting customers, laughing with Mila when she teased me about still being sleepy — everything was normal, ordinary. But I noticed the small things that felt wrong.
A delivery box left slightly ajar.
A shadow that lingered too long by the window.
A faint scrape, like someone’s shoe on the wet pavement outside.
Each little sign I tried to dismiss. But the awareness prickled at my skin, tugging at the corners of my senses. Someone was here. Someone was watching.
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By the time I walked home, the streets were slick from a sudden rain. Steam rose from manhole covers, curling in thin, ghostlike tendrils. My coat was too light for the chill, and I pulled it tighter, glancing over my shoulder more times than I wanted to admit.
Nothing.
And yet, I couldn’t shake it — the feeling that someone moved when I did, lingered when I stopped, and vanished when I dared to look.
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At home, I closed the door behind me, locked it, and leaned against it. My heartbeat was loud in my ears. My apartment was supposed to be safe. Mine. Alone.
The hum of the refrigerator, the tick of the clock, the muffled city — all normal. But the dream hadn’t ended. Not entirely. It hummed faintly in the air around me, and with it came the scent.
It was subtle at first — a trace of something sharp, like metal and rain, layered with something warmer, something almost sweet. I froze. My pulse jumped.
It shouldn’t have been there.
I moved slowly through the apartment, scanning every familiar corner, every object I’d placed myself. Nothing. Everything was exactly as I left it. And yet… the scent lingered, brushing against my senses, impossible and intimate all at once.
I pressed a hand to my chest. My mind tried to rationalize — maybe a neighbor’s cigarette, maybe something from outside the building. But deep down, I knew. I knew it was him.
And I didn’t know how to feel.
Fear twisted with an odd, unnameable warmth. Anger curled in my stomach, demanding I find him, confront him. But a small part of me — the part that had felt safe in the dream, that had felt the brush of his unseen presence — trembled with curiosity instead.
I closed my eyes, inhaling, holding onto the scent as though it were a fragile thread. My pulse slowed slightly, even as my mind screamed at me to move, to lock every door, to hide.
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Sleep came reluctantly that night. My dreams were no longer vague. He was there in fragments: a shadow leaning just beyond the lamplight, the glint of pale eyes under a hood, a faint warmth in the space where his hand should have been.
I woke often, trembling, every time catching the faint trace of him — the same scent, drifting through the apartment like a promise I couldn’t place.
I wanted to leave a note for Mila, to tell her I was scared, but the words felt foolish, inadequate. I couldn’t explain it. No one could understand. Not the dreams, not the feeling of being watched without seeing, not the pull that seemed to tether me to someone I hadn’t met.
And yet, even with all the fear, even with the panic that gnawed at the edges of my thoughts, there was a magnetism I couldn’t deny.
I tried to tell myself it was wrong. Dangerous. That someone watching me — lurking, leaving traces — could never be safe.
But my body betrayed me. The lingering scent seemed to seep into my skin, into my bones, leaving a warmth that clashed violently with the terror I felt.
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By morning, I was exhausted, my hair damp from restless nights, eyes rimmed with fatigue. I moved through the small routines that anchored me: coffee, shower, checking the locks — multiple times. Everything seemed ordinary. Normal. Secure.
But the scent remained. A whisper in my senses, hovering just beyond comprehension. It was impossible to ignore, impossible to shake. And it terrified me in ways I couldn’t name.
I sat by the window for a long time, staring at the city. People passed below, oblivious. Cars hummed past. Dogs barked in the distance. Life went on as it always had.
And yet, I knew. Someone had been in my space, had touched the edges of my life, had left a mark I couldn’t see but could feel.
It wasn’t the boxes on the shop floor, or the shadow in the street, or even the dreams. It was this: the faint, impossible trace of him, lingering in my world, haunting me with his presence, teasing the edges of my understanding.
A scent.
Familiar. Unknown.
Warm. Dangerous.
I pressed my palms to my eyes. The city outside blurred, rain streaking the glass, making the lights shimmer like fractured stars. I couldn’t name the danger. I couldn’t see it clearly. I didn’t even know him.
But I knew this: I was no longer alone.
And something in me — a mix of fear, curiosity, and that strange, magnetic longing — knew I would never forget it.
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The apartment was silent now.
Too silent.
I turned over in bed, trying to convince myself that sleep would return. The lingering scent hovered in my senses like a promise, like a warning, like a shadow just beyond the veil of understanding.
And somewhere in the darkness, the echo of eyes I could not see pressed against me, unseen but undeniable.
I shivered.
And then I realized — I would never be able to ignore it.
