Stranger in the club bathroom #1
~Amanda’s POV~
When I got out of bed this morning, I never imagined the day would end with my knees pressed against the cold, sticky tiles of a dingy club bathroom, mascara streaking my cheeks, while my lips stretched obscenely around the thick, veined cock of a complete stranger, whose name I didn't even know.
His heavy shaft pulsed against my tongue, salty and musky, filling my mouth so completely I could barely breathe. The low, guttural groan he let out as I took him deeper sent a fresh gush of wetness between my thighs. My pussy clenched around nothing, aching, throbbing with a need I’d denied myself for years.
Spit trailed down my chin, dripping onto my heaving tits, and all I could think was more. I wanted him to ruin me. I wanted to choke on every inch until I forgot Nathan’s name.
But let’s back up. Because twelve hours earlier, I was still the wide-eyed, virgin girlfriend who thought today was going to be perfect.
I woke up buzzing with nervous excitement, the kind that makes your stomach flip and your skin tingle. It was Nathan’s twenty-fifth birthday... three years together, three years of "not yet," of "I want it to be special," of saving my virginity like a precious heirloom, and I’d finally decided.
Today I was ready to give it to him.
No more waiting.
No more excuses.
I wanted him to be my first. I wanted to feel him inside me, to finally understand the mystery of the friction and the heat that everyone talked about.
I spent extra time getting ready. I slid into a soft, fitted sundress that hugged my waist and flared just enough to show off my legs. The neckline dipped low enough to hint at cleavage without screaming “fuck me.” Light makeup, mascara to make my green eyes pop, a touch of blush, and glossy pink lips.
I spritzed on that sweet vanilla-amber perfume he always complimented. My heart raced the whole Uber ride over. I’d even called him twice on the way. No answer. He’s probably still asleep or setting up something cute, I told myself.
When I reached his condo, the silence in the hallway felt heavy. I pressed my thumb to the keypad, but the door didn't even click... it was already ajar, just by an inch. A cold shiver, a premonition I didn't want to acknowledge, crawled up my spine.
"Nathan?" I called out, my voice sounding small in the foyer.
I stepped inside, and the first thing I saw was his leather belt discarded on the rug. Then a pair of black lace panties that definitely weren't mine. Then a bra, hooked over the arm of the sofa like a trophy. My heart didn't just break; it constricted, a physical tightening in my chest that made it hard to draw air.
Then came the sound. A wet, rhythmic slapping. A high-pitched, breathless moan that escalated into a guttural shriek. And then Nathan’s voice... deep, strained, and filled with a raw hunger I had never heard him direct at me.
"Yeah, just like that, baby. Take it all."
My legs felt like jelly, swaying beneath me as I moved toward the bedroom door. I didn't want to look, but I couldn't stop. Through the crack in the door, the sunlight hit them perfectly. Nathan was flat on his back, his hands clamped tightly onto the hips of a blonde woman I didn't recognize. She was positioned over him, her back arched, her breasts swaying as she rode him with a frantic, desperate energy.
He looked... obsessed. He looked satisfied in a way I had never seen, like she was the best thing he’d ever felt.
My vision blurred. I didn't think. I just threw the door open. The wood hit the wall with a deafening crack.
“What the fuck, Nathan?!”
The woman screamed, scrambling off him and pulling the duvet to her chest. Nathan didn't even look embarrassed. He just sighed, reaching for his boxers on the floor.
"Amanda. You weren't supposed to be here until six," he said, his voice flat, devoid of any guilt.
"I came early! It’s your birthday! I was... I was going to give you everything today!" I was shaking, the tears blurring my vision. "Three years, Nathan! Three years I saved myself for you! But here you are fucking someone else."
He stood up, tall and indifferent, his cock still semi-erect and glistening with her fluids. He looked me up and down with a sneer that made me feel smaller than I ever had.
"And that’s the problem, Amanda." he snapped. "Three years of waiting for a 'special moment' that never came. Do you have any idea how boring you are? How exhausting it is to date a statue?”
“I’m a man, Amanda. I have needs that don't involve waiting for you to finally decide you're 'ready.' She was ready thirty seconds after we met."
"You’re a pig," I whispered, the words tasting like ash.
"I’m realistic," he countered, stepping toward me. "Go home, Amanda. Go find some guy who wants to play house with a boring little virgin. I’m done waiting for a prize that’s probably not even worth the effort."
I didn't stay for another word. I turned and ran, the silk of my dress rustling against my thighs, a mocking reminder of the night that was supposed to be.
The cab smelled of stale cigarettes and cheap air freshener. I sat in the back, my makeup ruined, my pride non-existent. My mind was a carousel of Nathan’s insults.
Boring.
A statue.
Not worth the effort.
"Where to, lady?" the driver asked, glancing at me in the rearview mirror.
I looked out the window at the neon lights of the city beginning to flicker to life. A dark, vengeful heat began to simmer in my gut. He thought I was boring? He thought I was a statue?
Fine. I’d show him. I’d show myself. I was going to lose that useless piece of skin today, and I didn't care if it was to a stranger in a dark alley.
“Take me to Eclipse. The club downtown.”
***************
The bass thumped through the club like a second heartbeat. I bypassed the bar and headed straight for the restrooms to fix the wreckage of my face. But the women’s room was cordoned off with yellow tape, a burst pipe, apparently.
I didn't care. I ducked into the men’s room, hoping it would be empty.
It wasn't.
I stopped dead near the sinks. From one of the stalls, or rather, the open area near the far end, I heard it. A low, rhythmic grunt. A heavy, masculine breathing that sounded like a predator in the dark. I crept closer, my heart hammering. Around the corner of the partition, I saw him.
He was older, maybe mid-thirties, with broad shoulders that strained against the fabric of a charcoal-grey suit. He had his back partially turned to me, leaning against the marble wall, his trousers pushed down to his thighs. His hand was a blur of motion, wrapped around a cock that looked impossibly large, dark-veined, and angry. He was jerking off with a brutal, focused intensity.
"Fuck," he growled, his voice a deep, gravelly baritone that vibrated in my very marrow. "So tight... fuck..."
I should have left. I should have screamed. Instead, I stood there, paralyzed. I watched the way his muscles flexed in his arm, the way his knuckles went white with every downward stroke.
My pussy, usually a silent, dormant thing, suddenly gave a violent, demanding throb. A slick heat began to pool between my legs, soaking into my silk panties.
I wanted that. I wanted that hand on me. I wanted that voice growling in my ear while he ruined me.
He threw his head back, his eyes squeezed shut, a low moan escaping his lips. "God, I need to sink into something..."
In my trance-like state, my clutch slipped from my sweating fingers. It hit the tile with a loud thud.
The man froze. His hand stopped mid-stroke. He turned slowly, his eyes dark with a mixture of irritation and sudden, sharp hunger. He didn't cover himself. He stood there, fully exposed, his massive, weeping cock standing straight out from his body.
"What the hell?" he muttered, his gaze locking onto mine.
I couldn't speak. I could only stare.
He took in my disheveled hair, my tear-stained cheeks, and then his eyes dropped to my chest. My nipples were hard, straining against the thin emerald silk, announcing my arousal to the room.
A slow, predatory smirk spread across his face. He knew. He could smell the desperation and the heat coming off me in waves.
"You like what you see, sweetheart?" he asked, his voice dropping an octave. He gave his cock a slow, deliberate squeeze, a bead of pre-cum glistening at the tip.
"You look like you're starving. You want to have some cock?"
My brain screamed no, but my body was already lost. I had been a "good girl" for twenty-three years, and it had gotten me a cheated heart and a humiliated soul.
I nodded. Just once. A small, jerky movement of my chin.
"Come here then," he commanded, the authority in his tone making my knees buckle.
I moved like a puppet on strings. Each step felt like walking through honey. When I reached him, the scent of him hit me... sandalwood, expensive bourbon, and raw, uncut maleness. He was a head taller than me, a wall of solid muscle. He reached out, his thumb catching my chin and forcing me to look up into his dark, piercing eyes.
"What are you waiting for, kitten?" he whispered, his breath hot against my face. "Get down on your knees and suck it. Show me exactly how much you want it."
